please rewrite the research based on our proposal and introduction. include historical development in the introduction.
8 to 12 pages without the cover page and bibliography

OSCOLA style (oxford legal style)

add footnotes

bibliography

argumentative

use online sources (articles, journals...etc) all legal

use primary sources

provide all the links you used

you can use only one book and give us all the information about it from the page number and what line and the tile of the book..etc

use active voice

provide the source of each information

write the historical development and the background within the introduction.

put the thesis statement the last sentence in the introduction.

when you move from one sentence to another use more transition words.

divide it to sections and subsections .

its important to rebuttal.

please use our proposal and outline as guidance!!!!!!!! 


please change the whole research and dont take the uk side.





i dont  like the research so please change it