HI BRO, IT NEEDS REVISION. THIS IS A CASE STUDY U DID FOR ME, I GOT A GRADE OF (B),

HOWEVER, PROFESSOR GAVE ME A CHANCE TO REVISE SO I CAN HIGHER MY GRADE. BUT THERE IS A DUE DATE.

ANYWAYS, U DID THIS CASE STUDY FOR ME, IT NEEDS SOME REVISION, MY PROFESSOR LEFT A BIG BIG FEEDBACK AND COMMENT, STATING HER IMPRESSION REGARDING MY CASE ASSGINMENT.

PLZ DO CHECK THE CASE ASSIGNMENT WORD DOCUMENT ATTACHED, WHICH U DID LAST WEEK PERHAPS. AND THEN STRAIGHT UP CHECK THE OTHER DOCUMENT I ATTACHED, WHICH IS THE PROFESSOR FEEDBACK/COMMENT, PLZ MAKE SURE U READ ALL OF THE FEEDBACK, IT IS A BIG LONG, BUT U MUST READ IT TO UNDERSTAND WHAT MY PROFESSOR SAID ABOUT MY SUBMISSION.

HONESTLY, I FELT SHE MASSIVELY CRITIZED MY WORK, AND GAVE ME AN AVERAGE GRADE, GRADE OF B IS AVERAGE IN DOCTORAL LEVEL.

LUCKILY I HAVE A CHANCE TO INCREASE IT IF I REVISE.

PLZ DO WHAT U BELIEVE SHOULD BE DONE IN ORDER TO POSITIVALLY IMPRESS MY PROFESSOR.

I WANT TO PROVE TO MA PROFESSOTR THAT I WAS ABLE TO REVISE IT, AND I IMPROVED.