narration project

4-5 pages 

Tell a story from your own life in which you learned a lesson 

Choose only one of these words which are happy, sad, surprised, afraid, disgusted, angry when you write a story, and pick the event that you think will be the easiest to describe in 4-5 pages Please write as a freshman student. 

1- who is the main character?

2-what dose he want ? 

3- what can prevent him from getting what he wants? 

4- how dose he try to overcome it ? 

5- what did he get in the end ?

Here is my story just ad many words to be 4-5 pages and also correct the grammar please focus on grammar, punctuation, and vocabulary. 

When I was child I was dreaming to come in USA and study there, after I graduate from high school. I went to my parent and I said to them that I would go study in USA my parent refused , I tried more than a hundred million times persuaded them to go there but they Rejected. I just need money to go there in fact They have the money but they refused to give me the money to study there because they thought that I could not rely on my self and I could not keep the money with me and also they thought that I was going to waste the money to buy bad stuff like drink or smoke if they give me. I gave up to convince my parents and to go there. After-that I applied to many universities in my country no university had given me the acceptance. I tried to apply once again but no university had answered to me, in that moment I thought my dream is going to destroy and I'm going to lose my future, I have eight brothers and three sisters everyone in my family thought that I'm bad cause I don't have the acceptance from any university and nobody give me the care except my older brother and my sisters they encouraged me. They told me that I can accomplish my dream. One night My sister called me and she told me why you do not work and you should work to collect money to go studying in USA. She tried to help me and advised me. After-that I called my older brother to help me to find a job. my brother always encourage me. Then, He found work for me in a hospital, my job was a receptionist. When I started work I felt that I could not work cause everyone who worked with me wanted to be better than the other 

And also I had supervisor who always driving me crazy because of him I would resign from my work but Who prevented me from resignation is my dream I chose to work in order to collect money After one year from hard working I collect huge amount of money in then I asked for resignation then I went to my father I told him thank you for you made me rely on myself I booked the ticket to United state 

I learn from this story that nobody can prevent me from getting my dream even the money .